
sneak peak
Some of the reviews I got from my friends:It seems like what you would write
Your writing has improved tremendously
The character seems just like you
As they reached the staircase landing, the smell of hot chocolate wafted through
her nose and calmed her nerves a tad. As if in a trance, she glided to the
kitchen and sat at her place where her favourite rose mug filled with her
beloved drink stood, and whiffed as much as she could of the aroma before
finally giving in to her taste buds’ demands. As the liquid particles landed
onto each taste bud, her mind suddenly turned blank, the surroundings spinned
and her world filled with nothing but chocolates. She closed her eyes and
rejoiced in the feelings that drink gave her. The bitter tinge of cocoa blending
with the sweetness of the sugar and the warmth of it all filled her soul with
ease. She savoured every moment the sweet taste of the mixture lingered on her
tongue and the sensation of the solution running down her throat, slowing her
heartbeat, dissolving with it her worries. She licked the leftover chocolate
from her lips and gave a contented sigh. This is what chocolates made her.
Anything can be solved with chocolates. This is better than alcohol any day.
Hands down. She grumbled when a voice interrupted her daze, causing her to crash
back to reality.
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12:38 am